The Stone Floor : Sunday Photo Fiction

12 thoughts on “The Stone Floor : Sunday Photo Fiction”

  1. A great twist! Maybe he’ll do better next time. 🙂 I like the use of present tense to tell the story. I hope you don’t mind me pointing it out, but when you use speech tags there should be a comma within the speech marks and a lower case letter on the next word, unless its a name. It should be: ‘“You tripped the perimeter alarm,” he berates.’ I hope that helps. 🙂

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      1. Well personally I write for my enjoyment but also because I’d like to progress. If I keep on making mistakes I won’t progress. You have a wonderful way of drawing things to my attention so please don’t hesitate in the future!

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