The Motel : Friday Fictioneers

34 thoughts on “The Motel : Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Dear Graham,

    As I try to read all the FF stories every week, it doesn’t leave much time for chasing down serials. Happily this story does stand alone. Love the reference to the game of Cat and Mouse and ending with Meow-type message. I give it two paws up.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Just because they got her mobile number does not mean they got her whereabouts. So no need to run, just yet 🙂 Unless they are going to GPS track her. In which case she will have to ditch her mobile. I wonder if my comment is 100 words? :/ 🙂

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  3. I’m thinking that if she got a phone call that said, “Miao (Meow)” then that makes her the mouse! Not good! Great story but I generally have a hard time remembering continuations too because of the amount of stories I read each week.

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  4. Nery nice story, and I liked the prequel as well. I’m no expert, but I’d say you succeeded in having 2 independent stories and still leaving readers wondering what happens next.

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