The Bar : Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

21 thoughts on “The Bar : Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers”

  1. Lovely how you sketched out an entire life from teenage years to death. There’s a subtle shift in tone after “Yes, some of my fondest memories were made here.” from joyous to bitter-sweet. Great writing!

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  2. It’s an interesting place to have a funeral. Poor guy, separated from his wife by death. She must have been young if she still had children who were children. We go when go I guess, it isn’t always fair when.
    Great thoughtful story.

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