Late afternoon : Friday Fictioneers

17 thoughts on “Late afternoon : Friday Fictioneers”

  1. A nicely reflective piece. I enjoyed the symbolism of throwing the relationship away and then attempting to smooth it out again. I pondered the use of “it had rained” with “and the ground is” because it didn’t sound right to me. So I looked it up and (if you’re interested) the pluperfect (it had rained) is used to describe something that occurred earlier than the time being considered, when the time being considered is already in the past. Which it isn’t, if you use “the ground is”. Am I boring or what? 😦

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