The Secret : Friday Fictioneers

33 thoughts on “The Secret : Friday Fictioneers”

  1. Dear Graham,

    Cute story of children’s vivid imaginations. Very enjoyable. Only one piece of crit, if you don’t mind. I found their ages in parentheses more of a distraction than a stage setter. We can tell by the dialogue and their reactions that they’re children. Nice one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. I love crit, it makes me grow. I cut a lot out to shrink it to 100 words. Perhaps some other way to set their ages might have been preferable ?

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  2. Children, of course, imagine all kinds of wonderful things. What’s impressive is when an adult imagines that a child may imagine that a dress is the hanging remnant of a desicated child. Well done

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