The Firmament : FFfAW

14 thoughts on “The Firmament : FFfAW”

  1. I enjoyed your descriptive writing with this story. Just describing the time it took her to eat the muffin helped maintain the pace and the whole story flowed so well. Nicely done, Graham.

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  2. What a great little story! I love the fact that she gathers herself for her interview and takes the time to take in her surroundings – so much depends on close observation, something I’m not always good at, since my head is frequently in the clouds!
    Wonderfully described details!

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