Away from the Crowd : Friday Fictioneers

28 thoughts on “Away from the Crowd : Friday Fictioneers”

  1. I love the descriptions you pack into this story; it takes us there and shows the depth of feeling. Those last couple of lines give it extra punch, becuase it’s only a memory. Small side-note, I think you mean “alley” in the first line.

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